Here is an example of a completed Concluding Paragraph based on Santiago from The Old Man and the Sea being an ideal role model:

     Not having a worthwhile role model may result in a lack of inspiration and motivation, ensuring people not being able to push themselves to conquer life’s challenges and attain success. (restated Hook) Manolin, the young friend of Santiago in The Old Man and the Sea, is able to learn much about fishing, perseverance and overcoming obstacles with the mentoring and guidance of the savvy Santiago. (restated Bridge) Manolin learns vital life lessons from Santiago’s legacy created from his compelling life experiences and wealth of knowledge as a redeemed fisherman. (restated “So What”) Manolin’s pride in being a mentee to Santiago is conveyed through his great anticipation of the old fisherman’s counsel and Manolin will adopt this wisdom long after Santiago dies. (restated Main Claim) Although Santiago is extremely knowledgeable and an expert in his livelihood, he remains humble, determined and brave during the course of the novella. (restated Arguments) While becoming a positive role model is not always easy, Hemingway’s Santiago demonstrates that anyone can be a role model regardless of age, race or gender and provide inspiration to people around them. (Final Statement)