The Concluding Sentence is the final sentence in the Body Paragraph. It restates the Topic Sentence and summarizes the argument made in the current Body Paragraph. The Concluding Sentence can also transition readers to your next Body Paragraph. A transition Concluding Sentence often uses the following forms: Not only…but also, Besides, As well as and In Addition (refer to the following transition examples).

Example Body Paragraph

– Humbleness of Santiago Body Paragraph short of Concluding Sentence

First, throughout the novella, Santiago consistently shows a high degree of humbleness in his exchanges with people and the natural world. (Topic Sentence) During a conversation about fishing, Manolin says that Santiago is the best fisherman but Santiago shows his humility by disagreeing with Manolin’s opinion. (Point – about being humble with people) On page 7 Manolin states, 

“And the best fisherman is you.”

Santiago replies with, “No. I know others better.”

Manolin continues, “Qué va, there are many good fishermen and some great ones. But there is only you.”

Santiago replies, “Thank you. You make me happy. I hope no fish will come along so great that he will prove us wrong.” (Proof from the novel that supports the Point)

Summarizing Concluding Example

Santiago exhibits great humbleness in his interactions with people, and he grants much respect to the creatures he encounters. (restatement of the Topic Sentence)

Transition Concluding Examples (2)

(restatement of current Body Paragraph and introduction of the next Body Paragraph)

1. Not only does Santiago constantly show his humbleness with all those he meets, but also he retains his determination despite his advanced age.

2. Besides Santiago constantly showing his humbleness with all those he meets, he also retains his determination despite his advanced age.